How To Art on Caffeine

Yeah too much coffee. Shake-a-rama.

I am -attempting- to do another comic but I fail lol.
Now I usually start with quick shitty sketches to get an idea of how I want it to look and what I want the characters to say, then I start doing the actual drawings, but my shaky hand started to get a mind of its own to the point I couldn't even tell what's going on, even though I drew the damn thing. Witness the breakdown: [link]
Me attempting to line the BG image: [link]

They're -supposed- to be eating at Molten Morsels, dressed in AC Moltara fan outfits (Olly wearing dat Fro wig), with my character chomping down on Gears and Lava...but ummm..

Hand wat are you doing. Hand stahp.